I am creating a stop motion animated commercial for my final project..... The commercial is advertising a Strawberry Smoothie very tasty
I am creating a stop motion animated commercial for my final project..... The commercial is advertising a Strawberry Smoothie very tasty
Bianca here again.
ReplyDeletereally good, couple criticisms..
the last speech bubble can stay in the scene longer, feel like it rushed in and out... let it stay couple seconds longer
and again its just the door scene.. once its smoothed out it'll be perfect - as in slowed down . it doesnt need to be pefect to the T.. its jagged animation creates substance and brings character to the animations so its just about slowing down those things
also as an added thing.... the strawberry man, when he find the 2d character, instead of being quite calm before the trumpet blow.. he can act in a state of urgence.. as if he wasn;t expecting to see this malnourished man. no need to change the scnece.. just add a few sound bites maybe..but thats just an EXTRA thing not a criticism